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must be my best tune this year

Postby Jesse Gorter » Sat Nov 27, 2010 6:58 pm

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Re: must be my best tune this year

Postby Mo » Sat Nov 27, 2010 8:36 pm

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Re: must be my best tune this year

Postby Jesse Gorter » Sat Nov 27, 2010 9:58 pm

:) yeh here
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Re: must be my best tune this year

Postby 100NAMES » Mon Nov 29, 2010 7:43 pm

Great work, Jesse! Love it. I would change the drums a bit, they seem way too compressed and I think a good crispy drum would work well over this. But, the rest is really good.
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Re: must be my best tune this year

Postby Darkwave » Tue Nov 30, 2010 3:48 pm

The intro is greaT with all the melodies and the cool progression...very trippy stuff.

After 1:43 the composition part is still nice but you lost me..
The mix feels busy at the low mids/mids and poor at the flanks needs a little subs but mostly air.
Also needs gainstaging especially the pads&strings that enter are too loud covering other elements.
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Re: must be my best tune this year

Postby Laurie » Thu Dec 02, 2010 6:07 pm

Love the atmosphere created in the intro, the strings do wonders to establish a grand soundscape with emotion. I feel there could perhaps be some more brightness in the drums; the bass kicks are a little too boomy and the snares could maybe be a bit more crispy like 100 Names suggested.

Great piece of work though overall, top quality composition as always 8-)
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Re: must be my best tune this year

Postby Jesse Gorter » Wed Dec 08, 2010 7:21 pm

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thanks for the kind words and the feedback! :D
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