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Adoption

Postby buttonpsi » Sat May 02, 2009 9:29 pm

tell me what you think...not sure where to go with this song.

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Re: Adoption

Postby Songbird » Wed May 06, 2009 6:10 am

I think it needs more variation.

Vocals here and there might work well also. I reckon vocals would help with the build up
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Re: Adoption

Postby MasterEvilAce » Wed May 06, 2009 6:15 am

Songbird wrote:I think it needs more variation.

Vocals here and there might work well also. I reckon vocals would help with the build up

Says the vocalist trying to find work :ugeek:
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Re: Adoption

Postby Songbird » Wed May 06, 2009 6:20 am

MasterEvilAce wrote:
Songbird wrote:I think it needs more variation.

Vocals here and there might work well also. I reckon vocals would help with the build up

Says the vocalist trying to find work :ugeek:



You know, there's a difference between a vocalist and a singer/ songwriter. :geek: And, no offence, but I wasnt asking to sing on the track. People who know me a little better are well aware that I will just come out and ask them if I want to sing on a track.

Thanks for insulting me by just referring to me as a vocalist though :roll:

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Re: Adoption

Postby Karinn » Sun May 17, 2009 1:36 am

the bass that start at 1:28 is awesome
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Re: Adoption

Postby Dr.EM » Sun May 17, 2009 3:02 pm

Sounding good! Mabye benefit from a well defined melodic element, but it certainly works well as a club type track :)
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